Tuesday, 20 November 2012

Screen play (redone)

1. EXT. UNDER THE BRIDGE NEAR ACLAND BURGHLEY - DAY 
LONG SHOT 
Eleanor and Hunter walking around until they reach the tunnel. Eleanor pushes Hunter against the wall of the tunnel. 
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CLOSE UP 
She puts her hand on his face. He puts his hand around her waist.She looks up to him and he looks back. She smiles then bites her lips. 
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MEDIUM LONG SHOT 
They kiss. 
SCENE FADES TO BLACK
2. INT. SUB-ENTRANCE OF THE VOID LOW ANGLE, LONG SHOT 
Opens the door. All you see is the antagonist's feet. Running towards the another door. Opens that door and slams it shut 
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CLOSE UP of the sign on the door - 'Please Keep Out, Under Further Notice'
3. EXT. FOREST- NIGHT
Eleanor, Hunter and a group of friends are all sat in the shack taking drugs and getting high together. Suddenly Eleanor stops and looks around. She shakes her head and stands.
ELEANOR
I can't keep doing this... it's pointless... we come in here and waste all our time and money on drugs to get high...
Eleanor ignores him and walks away from the group and runs off into the forest. 

4. UNKNOWN
Eleanor and Hunter stood next to each other, they then turned back to back, letting go of each others hands and move away from each other.
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5. INT- SITTING ROOM- DAY
A flash back of the Hunters mums death. a black and white scene of shadows on the wall, a man with a knife looming over a woman curled up on the floor. 

6. INT- ELEANOR'S ROOM -DAY
CAMERA PANS THE ROOM - 360 TURN
The room is filled with memories that establishes their relationship together. Hunter is sitting on the floor with Eleanor as the two are drinking, empty bottles and cans everywhere. Hunter pulls out a pill and is about to swallow it but is interrupted by Eleanor seeing him. They start arguing.
LONG SHOT
ELEANOR
(SHOCKED)
What the hell are doing?
CAMERA TRACKS HUNTER STANDING UP.
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HUNTER
(Shouting with an angry tone)
Do you know how hard it is to stop?!!! It's been hard for me to resist.
WHILST ELEANOR IS TALKING THE CAMERA'S FOCUS IS ON HUNTER. A NON-DIETETIC HEART BEATING SOUND IS PLAYING TO SHOW HOW TENSE HE FEELS. 
Hunter doesn't reply. He gets frustrated. He pushes her against the wall, Eleanor is scared and tries to back away more but is stopped by the wall, she looks away. He slams his fist into the wall instead of at her. Eleanor cowers away from him and looks up at him, scared. Hunter holders to her to the wall as he keeps his fist on the wall, clenching it a little, he clenches his hand on her waist. Glaring at her. Eleanor takes a deep breath and tries to look strong and in control.

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7. EXT- FOREST- NGIHT
LONG SHOT: 
The dense woods with someone moving around, we can see their shadow among the trees as they move around, their head is low, it is unclear if it is a male or a female.
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8. INT- ELEANOR'S BEDROOM
Hunter doesn't reply. He gets frustrated. He pushes her against the wall, Eleanor is scared and tries to back away more but is stopped by the wall, she looks away. He slams his fist into the wall instead of at her. Eleanor cowers away from him and looks up at him, scared. Hunter holders to her to the wall as he keeps his fist on the wall, clenching it a little, he clenches his hand on her waist. Glaring at her. Eleanor takes a deep breath and tries to look strong and in control.
ELEANOR
(Quivers in fear)
Then just leave... the door is open for you.
Hunter lets go of her and walks out of the room and slams the door on his way out. Eleanor falls to the ground in tears when he leaves. There are tears in her eyes as she looks at the door, holding herself with her arms. You hear a crash from outside where Hunter was.
9. EXT - FOREST- NIGHT
The killer is in the background with CHARLIE in the front. Charlie is looks scared as she glances behind her and see's the masked killer. Charlie has scars on her from injecting heroine and doing other drugs.
CHARLIE
(Scared)
Who are you?
The killer is silent as he closes the distance between them. He pulls a syringe of Heroine out of his pocket before he injects Charlie with the overdose.
CLOSE UP
Charlies eyes wide and scared. Before she collapses.
10. EXT - FOREST- NIGHT
Eleanor, Hunter, Amy, Charlie and Daniel are all walking through the forest. Each one holding a bag. They arrive at the shack and smile to each other before going in.
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11. EXT- FOREST- NIGHT
The killer is stood behind AMY dressed in ALL BLACK. He has a rope in his hand. Amy looks up at him, scared before he is beside her with the rope around her arm.
AMY
(scared)
What do you want with me?
The killer remains silent as he puts the rope around her neck and creates a noose, making it as tight as he can before it strangles Amy, she collapses on the ground, the rope still around her neck. The killer has gloves on so that no one can tell from finger prints who it is.
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12. EXT. OUTSIDE THE VOID- DAY
FROM ACTOR'S PERSPECTIVE OR HEADCAM
Breathing heavily. The antagonist is running towards the entrance to the void. Struggles. to get the keys out and opening the door. 
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CLOSE UP
Unable to open the door because they uses the wrong key. Tries different keys. Drops keys before picking them up. Eventually opens the door. 
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13. EXT- FOREST- NIGHT
The Killer is right behind DANIEL. He holds him and puts a knife to his throat.
DANIEL
(scared)
No!
The killer laughs and slit's his throat with a blackened spoon that has been sharpened. Daniel coughs and chocks coughing up blood and collapses to the ground, shaking and coughing as blood oozes from the wound in his neck. The camera focuses on Daniel and when it PANS back up the killer has disappeared.
14. INT. THE VOID
MEDIUM LONG SHOT - CRYPTIC NOISE IN THE BACKGROUND.
Running down the stairs and falls on the last step. 
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FROM ACTOR'S PERSPECTIVE OR HEADCAM
Breathing intensely. Tilts head up then to left to right to check no one is here. Starts running further in the void
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LONG SHOT
Antagonist running towards the camera. 
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CLOSE UP
Stumbles on the way. Jumps to avoid getting glass on his feet. Screenshots of the location. Reaches main location
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Hunter sits down. Gets some cannabis out of pocket. Rolls it up and inhales it. He sighs and tilts his head back. He starts hallucinating. 
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Feels paranoid and starts walking back and forth. He sees picture of him and Eleanor on the wall and goes crazy and rips them down and throws it in the ditch. 
HE WALKS OUT OF SCENE:
15. INT. ELEANOR'S BATHROOM - DAY
Close up of her face. Air bubbles develops when she opens her mouth. Eyes wide open. Lifts her head out of the bath. Breathes heavily in and out. She realizes she almost drowned herself unintentionally. Sits up and pulls her hair back.
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CLOSE UP OF HER FOREARM TO EXTREME CLOSE UP OF HER WRIST
She finds fresh cuts on her arm and her wrist. The heart on her wrist turns into a broken heart. 
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The blood drips in the bath. She begins to panic. Discovers beside her that the razor has fresh blood on it.
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Pulls the bath plugs. Watches the blood and water flow away. 
Grabs the towel on the floor. Wraps it around her torso. Gets up and out the bath. 
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Walks to the sink. Turns the tap on and washes the blood away, furiously. Smacks the edges of the sink. Breathes intensely.  
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Slowly lifts up her head and looks at the steamed mirror. Discovers something dark next to her blurred reflection. Wipes the steamed mirror. 
CLOSE UP OF HER WIPING THE MIRROR, WHEN SHE REACHES THE DARK SHADOW. 
She discovers who it is. She turns and looks at the killer. 
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(CLOSE UP OF HER FACE shivering and quivering )
Fear in her eyes. She turns around. Turns back to the mirror. 
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CLOSE UP OF HER EYES AND She hears a dissonant voice. HER EYES ARE WIDE OPEN.
ANTAGONIST
(Low, deep, artificial voice)
You're next Eleanor.
FADE TO BLACK
With the black background we hear a screaming and then titles come up.

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