More Editing

After putting up what we had of the trailer so far, we got feedback saying we needed to make the story more clear, so we decided to look at trying out putting titles over some of the footage, heres a small screen shot of the work so far, we have decided to go for 'Have you ever been on a trip to hell?' to symbolise the journey of addicts on drugs. I was then thinking, making putting 'I have' after to make it more fitting as this story is of a girl trying to get out of drugs but it all going wrong. I also thought it might work because it makes it more personal and like you are actually following her story, rather than just another random story.