1. EXT. UNDER THE BRIDGE NEAR ACLAND BURGHLEY - DAY
LONG SHOT
Eleanor and Hunter walking around until they reach the tunnel. Eleanor pushes Hunter against the wall of the tunnel.
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CLOSE UP
She puts her hand on his face. He puts his hand around her waist.She looks up to him and he looks back. She smiles then bites her lips.
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MEDIUM LONG SHOT
They kiss.
SCENE FADES TO BLACK
INT. SUB-ENTRANCE OF THE VOID LOW ANGLE, LONG SHOT
Opens the door. All you see is the antagonist's feet. Running towards the another door. Opens that door and slams it shut
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CLOSE UP of the sign on the door - 'Please Keep Out, Under Further Notice'
2. INT. ELEANOR'S ROOM
CAMERA PANS THE ROOM - 360 TURN
The room is filled with memories that establishes their relationship together. Hunter is sitting on the floor with Eleanor as the two are drinking, empty bottles and cans everywhere. Hunter pulls out a pill and is about to swallow it but is interrupted Eleanor seeing him. They start arguing.
LONG SHOT
ELEANOR
(SHOCKED)
The hell are doing?
CAMERA TRACKS HUNTER STANDING UP. WHEN THE CONVERSATION STARTS THE CAMERA MOVES BACK AND FORTH TO WHOEVER IS TALKING.
HUNTER
It's not what you think
ELEANOR
(Angrily)
I'm not that stupid you know?!!! I though you stopped doing this kind of stuff!
HUNTER
(Shouting with an angry tone)
Do you know how hard it is to stop this kind of stuff?!!! It's been hard for me to resist.
ELEANOR
(Calms down and talks in a reasonable way)
Talk to me and tell why you're still doing this?
WHILST ELEANOR IS TALKING THE CAMERA'S FOCUS IS ON HUNTER. A NON-DIETETIC HEART BEATING SOUND IS IN PLAYING TO SHOW HOW TENSE HE FEELS.
Hunter doesn't reply. He gets frustrated He pushes her against the wall. He slams his fist into the wall instead of at her. Eleanor cowers away from him.
HUNTER
(Forcefully)
Just be quiet ok? I don't care!
ELEANOR
(Quivers in fear)
Then just leave... the door is wide open for you.
Hunter lets go of her and walks out of the room and slams the door on his way out.
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INT. BEDROOM TO LIVING ROOM- NIGHT
Eleanor dressed in a white towel. Looks in the mirror. Wipes her tears whilst smudging her eye make-up.
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Slowly walks through the living room with memories of her deceased friends. Hanging photos of her friends all happy, focus one with them all on night of the murders- before the deaths.
Walk of shame.
Enters the bathroom.
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INT. BATHROOM- NIGHT
Holds the handle. As she twists her wrist you see a carved in heart with a 'H' in the middle of it. Closes the door.
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Turns on tap. Bath is ready. Close up of her feet. Drops the towel.
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LONG SHOT
Blurry, steamed up bathroom to censor her getting into the warm bath.
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Side view the bath. Eleanor sits in a upright fetal position. Then lays down.
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Close up of her face. Pulls her hair back. She sighs. Looks agitated. Empty alcohol bottles around her. A sharp and used razor beside the bath with a small amount of blood on it, bloody marks along the side of the bath.
ELEANOR
(stutters and shivers)
I'm sorry. I should have warned you all about him. But I didn't... I'm sorry... I'm so sorry.
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Eleanor takes a pill. Closes her eyes for a few moments. But passes out due to drug. Her head falls in the bath.
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3. EXT. ALLEY WAY- NIGHT
The killer is in the background with CHARLIE in the front looking scared and worried. Charlie has cuts and and bruises on her from the fighting with the killer.
CHARLIE
(begging)
Who are you?
There is no reply from the killer. The killer takes a few big strides and is stood behind CHARLIE with a syringe of heroine. He puts the needle in her and makes her OD, killing her instantly.
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The killer slightly closer than with Charlie. AMY is in the foreground with the killer behind her.
AMY
(scared)
What do you want with me?
The killer still doesn't reply. He stays a little way from her.The killer moves over to her with a ROPE (thing druggies use) and quickly gags her before he strangles her. Her body falls to the floor dead.
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The Killer is right behind DANIEL. He holds him and puts a knife to his throat.
DANIEL
(scared)
No!
The killer laughs and slit's his throat with a blackened spoon that has been sharpened. Daniel coughs and chocks coughing up blood and collapses to the ground, shaking and coughing as blood oozes from the wound in his neck. The killer disappears.
4. EXT. OUTSIDE THE VOID - DAY
FROM ACTOR'S PERSPECTIVE OR HEADCAM
Breathing heavily. The antagonist is running towards the entrance to the void. Struggles. to get the keys out and opening the door.
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CLOSE UP
Unable to open the door because they uses the wrong key. Tries different keys. Drops keys before picking them up. Eventually opens the door.
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INT. SUB-ENTRANCE OF THE VOID
LOW ANGLE, LONG SHOT
Opens the door. All you see is the antagonist's feet. Running towards the another door. Opens that door and slams it shut
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CLOSE UP of the sign on the door - 'Please Keep Out, Under Further Notice'
INT. THE VOID
MEDIUM LONG SHOT
Running down the stairs and falls on the last step.
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FROM ACTOR'S PERSPECTIVE OR HEADCAM
Breathing intensely. Tilts head up then to left to right to check no one is here. Starts running further in the void
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LONG SHOT
Antagonist running towards the camera.
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CLOSE UP
Stumbles on the way. Jumps to avoid getting glass on his feet. Screenshots of the location. Reaches main location
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Hunter sits down. Gets some cannabis out of pocket. Rolls it up and inhales it. He sighs and tilts his head back. He starts hallucinating.
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Feels paranoid and starts walking back and forth. He sees picture of him and Eleanor on the wall and goes crazy and rips them down and throws it in the ditch.
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CLOSE UP OF HIS EYES TO SHOW HOW HIGH HE IS - BLOODSHOT.
HE WALKS OUT OF SCENE:
6. INT. BATHROOM- NIGHT
Close up of her face. Air bubbles develops when she opens her mouth. Eyes wide open. Lifts her head out of the bath. Breathes heavily in and out. She realizes she almost drowned herself unintentionally. Sits up and pulls her hair back.
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CLOSE UP OF HER FOREARM TO EXTREME CLOSE UP OF HER WRIST
She finds fresh cuts on her arm and her wrist. The heart on her wrist turns into a broken heart.
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The blood drips in the bath. She begins to panic. Discovers beside her that the razor has fresh blood on it.
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Pulls the bath plugs. Watches the blood and water flow away.
Grabs the towel on the floor. Wraps it around her torso. Gets up and out the bath.
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Walks to the sink. Turns the tap on and washes the blood away, furiously. Smacks the edges of the sink. Breathes intensely.
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Slowly lifts up her head and looks at the steamed mirror. Discovers something dark next to her blurred reflection. Wipes the steamed mirror.
CLOSE UP OF HER WIPING THE MIRROR, WHEN SHE REACHES THE DARK SHADOW.
She discovers who it is. She turns and looks at the killer.
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(CLOSE UP OF HER FACE shivering and quivering )
Fear in her eyes. She turns around. Turns back to the mirror.
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CLOSE UP OF HER EYES AND She hears a dissonant voice. HER EYES ARE WIDE OPEN.
HUNTER/ KILLER
(Low, deep, artificial voice)
You're next
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